[Wgcp-whc] next session 10/8 & minutes of Alferi visit
Richard Deming
richard.deming at yale.edu
Sat Sep 25 12:47:52 EDT 2010
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> Dear All—
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> On Friday, September 17, the poet, novelist, and filmmaker Pierre
> Alferi joined us for a discussion of his work, particularly his
> collection OXO (French title: Kub Or), translated by Cole Swensen.
> I will give an overview of that discussion, but first I want to
> alert everyone to our next session, which will occur Fri Oct 8 from
> 3-5 PM in rm 116 of the Whitney Humanities Center.
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> On that day we will be discussing the work of the Brazilian poet
> Angelica Freitas. Specifically we will be reading a selection of
> poems from her book Rilke Shake. Our discussion that day will be
> shaped by the input of Hilary Kaplan, a WGCP member-at-large and
> Freitas’ American translator. I am attaching to this email the
> original versions in Portuguese and Hilary’s translations. These
> will be the texts on which we’ll we focus our discussion on 10/8.
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> Hilary has a terrific essay on translating Freitas here: http://digitalartifactmagazine.com/issue2/Translating_Poems_from_Angelica_Freitas_Rilke_shake
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> And I’ll clip the first two paragraphs to provide a biography for
> this poet:
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> Rilke shake (São Paulo: Cosac Naify, 2007), a collection of 45 short
> poems, is the first book by the young Brazilian poet Angélica
> Freitas. The title, a pun on milkshake (which in Brazil’s
> vernacular means just what it does in English), indicates the
> book’s contents: poetry approached as a shake of languages, words,
> canonical tradition and a measure of delight, whirred in
> postmodernity's ironic blender. The often first-person poems grapple
> with shaking off the influence of not only Rilke but also
> Shakespeare (the pun is not lost), Stein, Keats, Moore, Bishop,
> Bashō, Blake, Brodsky and Pound. In “não consigo ler os
> cantos” (“i can’t manage to read the cantos”) the speaker,
> established as female at the beginning of the book, asks the
> revolutionary and rhetorical question, “vamos nos livrar de ezra
> pound?/…/vamos nos livrar de mariane moore?” (“shall we free
> ourselves from ezra pound?/.../shall we free ourselves from marianne
> moore?”). Since she can't shake free of these titans, she shakes
> them together with everything else real and imagined from her life—
> family, languages learned or overheard, travels, dreams, homeland,
> and so on—to see if anything tasty results.
> Born 8 April 1973 in Pelotas, Rio Grande do Sul, Freitas studied
> journalism at the Universidade Federal do Rio Grande do Sul (UFRGS)
> in Porto Alegre, then worked as a reporter in São Paulo. She now
> lives in Pelotas and Holland, where she is translating poetry and
> working on a second book. She has published poems in the Brazilian
> journal Inimigo Rumor, and in Diário de Poesía (Argentina) and
> aguasfurtadas (Portugal). A translation of “love (collage)”
> appeared in Issue 6 (Spring 2007), dedicated to Brazilian poetry, of
> the American poetry journal Aufgabe; translations into English of
> “What is a tschüsstschüss?” (“o que é um baibai?”) and
> “Love, a collage” can be found in the German online art magazine
> Hilda. Freitas’ work is also included in the anthology Cuatro
> poetas recientes de Brasil (Buenos Aires: Black & Vermelho, 2006).
> She co-edits the Brazilian poetry journal Modo de Usar & Co (in
> print and online at revistamododeusar.blogspot.com) and keeps her
> own blog, tome uma xícara de chá (loop.blogspot.com).
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> The work of this poet seems to be in some ways sympathetic with
> Alferi’s work (and may set up our discussion later this semester of
> and with second-generation New York School poet David Shapiro).
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> Our discussion with Alferi began with a question to him about how he
> navigates his sense of the various media and literary forms in which
> he is invested. Alferi responded, and in large part this speaks to
> his process as an artist is that he sees himself as a land surveyor
> rather than a geometrist. The surveyor enters into a mapless space
> with no prior image of the territory. Alferi believes that through
> writing he feels his way into the space. Feeling his way, there is
> a trajectory for his thinking, but one without a map or without
> general knowledge. There are techniques of orientation such as
> triangulating position by way of fixed stars, but there don’t
> predetermine what is actually to be discovered.
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> In some ways, constraints are like these fixed stars as they are the
> pretext for generating his own responses so he can sort through his
> experiences. Alferi then shifted metaphors and suggested that form
> serves as a kind of sieve by which he can sift everyday experience
> for the moments of revelation, intuition and surprise that are part
> of daily life (and which too often go otherwise unnoticed).
> Beginning a work is the opportunity to invent (or find) the most
> effective sieve to make these discoveries possible.
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> When asked if there were any models that he had in mind in terms of
> his approach to working with language and with images he confessed
> that he often desired to emulate scientists insofar as there is a
> precision to their experimenting. In other words, his goal is not
> to arbitrarily play with language but to do things that produce new
> possibilities for insight and representation. In that way, we come
> to know the capabilities of consciousness that much better.
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> Alferi mentioned that when his work his characterized as
> “playful” it often seems that people feel the work lacks
> seriousness. In reality, he hopes that the use of language through
> poetic operations yields a broadened sense of what it means that we
> are primarily linguistic beings. It also indicates how form and
> language are organic, living things, susceptible to change,
> evolution, and adaptation. Poetry reveals the flexibility of
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> He discussed, for instance, the constraints of OXO—the seven lines
> of seven syllables across seven sections. With a seven-syllable
> line, there can be no caesura that establishes symmetry within the
> line. Any pause will group the elements of the line in odd
> patterns, resulting in a fundamental instability that appears line
> by line. The fact that Swensen’s translation breaks the lines in
> different places and places the caesuras in places different than in
> the French indicates how that instability is maintained across
> languages. The cubic trope that develops also lends itself to
> compactness within the lines and across the poem that visually
> signals his work’s decisive split from a more classical line. The
> difference is evident to the eye as well as the ear.
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> Alferi referred to this as a formless form, which sparked further
> discussion of what constitutes form. Alferi argued that poetry is
> not simply form but is the negotiation—and even the struggle--of an
> animating force with the plastic nature of linguistic form. We
> might see this as some animus (perhaps we might call this
> consciousness) working with and against the limitations of language.
> This also goes beyond simply one’s ideas of the literary and
> engages with metaphysical concerns with what constitutes being
> itself. This is another way, that the stakes of Alferi’s
> “playing" with language are revealed as being quite ambitious and
> profound.
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> In his films, which often incorporate linguistic tropes, Alferi
> feels he can represent the evanescence and ephemerality of language
> because time is such an essential part of cinema. His use of
> soundtracks allows him to create rhythmic pulses that enable one to
> scan (as one scans a poem’s prosody) the visual images. The
> combining of cinema and poetry into a shared poetics represents the
> fact that the ordering of perception is constantly occurring no
> matter how conscious or unconscious that process might be.
> Alferi’s work brings that process into view, makes it somewhat
> opaque is that we can be aware of the fact that the sieves we create
> to understand our experiences occur not just in the arts but in
> everyday life as well.
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> As is evident, the discussion of what constitutes form and the
> impact of aesthetic experience on one’s sense of the world was
> extremely generative and provocative. All agreed that this was a
> thoughtful and at times profound conversation and set the bar high
> for the rest of the semester. Our collective thanks to Pierre
> Alferi for his engaging thoughts and his willingness to join our
> group to discuss the issues arising from our reading of his work
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